
The horse was restless, sensing his master in the camp. But not yet. She wouldn’t enter the encampment yet. The waxing crescent moon was giving a wide grin on the night sky and Deathbearer had to exercise just a little bit more patience. Angralia had failed but the world of immortals offered other… instruments… for a carefully orchestrated jab at Belial’s pride. Some of those implements were just better than the others. And it seemed she had found the best possible one for her intrigue.
Mud squelched under invisible hooves but the sound drowned in the laughter coming from the campfires. It had stopped raining and the spirits of the troops were elated as the result. How little the mortals needed for the illusion of luck, happiness, or good fortunes. Just a calm night with star lit sky and extra rations of hooch. Deathbearer grimaced in derision over their foolishness and left the camp unseen. In silence. For now.
The real target of all her schemes wasn’t there anyway. He denied her even breathing the same air as he. The arrogant bastard. Belial. And the silken syllables of his name whispered into the oblivious darkness sounded both wistful and vengeful.
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You paint such a vivid picture here, great job!
Thank you, Doris. I’m happy you enjoyed reading it.
You have such an amazing way with words…xx
Thank you, Tal, for such a lovely compliment.
Great tease Love the fantasy genre and you capture it wonderfully
Thank you, Julez. I’m happy you enjoy my writing.
Excellent imagery and a fabulous tease.
Fabulous tease, in fact. The imagery is sticking with me.
Thank you, Molly. I love to hear that!
The imagery is impactful in this excerpt. (And I love the new site banner)
Thank you, Paloma. I’m happy you love both. Belial and Adhemar are delighted with the banner too.
Beautiful imagery! Loved it.
Thank you, Gemma. I’m glad you did.
Great tension building. I want to slap him and I don’t even know him.
lol, well, he just smirks and says things aren’t always as they appear.
I love your writing. It’s so visual. Great teaser
Thank you, Naomi. I’m happy you enjoyed reading.