
HUMP DAY HOOK is a weekly blog hop where each participating author posts one paragraph from either a published book or work in progress.
In celebration of Guardian Demon Series, my today’s excerpt comes from In Blue Poppy Fields and the spotlight is on Belial and Adhemar. Belial, as the Guardian Demon, appears in every book of mine and let’s just say that his lover Adhemar won’t be outshined
They have become inseparable, so you can be sure you’ll meet Adhemar in every book too. From the moment they formed their bond in In Blue Poppy Fields, that is. Enjoy reading.
The dance was both heaven and hell. Promising pleasure and denying the immediate satiation of need. Giving a little that was never enough. Again and again they stamped, again and again they swirled around, again and again their palms and orbs met in need, again and again their fingers avid for pleasure groped and stroked firm flesh. Until he almost couldn’t bear the fever of this night longer. And then he heard a smooth and rich, though slightly breathless: “Choose two of them,” in his mind. Hunt and Trickery and Blood. Now. Craving pulsed in his every nerve when his eyes roved over the circle. A young red-haired stud with bare chest caught his attention. And then a youth with long golden locks. Their color in the light of fires was like molten gold and his slender body promised cat-like litheness. Dancing closer to the one whose mane was on fire like the sky at sunset, he could see in the corner of his eye Belial approaching the other one. Their hands reached out almost at the same moment and dragged the prey onto the dance floor. And the crowd roared its throat hoarse in shrieks and whoops. The nobility chose their mates for tonight. In the night of Bain all were equal. And all was possible under the sky where full moon was making love to midnight clouds veiling it in tender embraces.
© Ciaran Dwynvil
I hope you enjoyed the night of Bain almost as much as they did
. If you’d like to read their story, you’ll have to wait a little longer. In Blue Poppy Fields will be published at the end of Q1 2013.
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Oooo, what great imagery. Nice hook.
Thank you, Michelle. I’m happy you liked it.
sigh… that was beautiful.
Thanks, Paloma. It was a very beautiful night for them and I’m happy you enjoyed reading.
Great description! I could picture the scene so well…great hook.
Thank you, Sarah. I’m happy you could see the scene vividly.
I really want to leave you a meaningful comment, I really do, but…I don’t have the words to do so after reading that. I can’t even imagine in what condition I’ll be after reading the whole scene. I’ll just agree with Paloma for now and say that it was incredibly beautiful, in a very primal way. Adhemar and Belial… *sighs*
It’s one of their cherished memories. They both love thinking about this particular night.
lol… I won’t try to foresee your condition after reading about the whole night of Bain
So muh in this. Very good HDH x
Thanks, Kerrianne.
Everyone has said it! Very creative snippet that draws you in! Well done!
Thanks, Kathleen. I’m happy you enjoyed reading.
I was drawn in right away..great hook!
Thanks, Alexandra. I’m happy they pulled you in our world for a while.
Oh, I am loving these!
Thank you!
Oh yes! I could feel the thrill of the hunt. Great hook!
Thanks, Jessica. I’m happy you felt it.
Got it! I apparently didn’t scroll down far enough lol. I enjoyed your post. Such rich description in an intriguing story. Great hook!
Thank you, Flossie. I’m happy you enjoyed reading!
Nice hook!
Thank you, Sandra
Oh wow. Painted a vivid, magical scene, well done!
Thank you!
Beautiful and poetic. Great job at capturing the moment.
Thank you, Layna. I’m happy you enjoyed reading.
Very nice hook. I can’t wait to read what you decide on next week.
Thank you, Jennifer. I’m happy to hear that
Your writing never fails to please me Ciaran, it’s always so beautifully thought out..x
Thank you, Tal. I’m happy you loved reading the snippet.
wonderful imagery, and that last line is pure poetry!
Thank you, Colette. I’m happy you enjoyed reading!